Hey. I checked out a few of your poems, and here's some general crit:
-Your endings are the best part of your poems. They wrap everything up nicely, and are quick to the point.
-Your work...lacks subtlety. Or art. Or whatever you want to call it. While this works fine every once in a while (like your endings that are so good), it gets boring. It's not clever. You throw around strong words, like "love" and "hate" and "ugly" and "meaning" and "angel" and "demon"...they don't help your work. What it looks like is someone who is desperately trying to be deep.
-Another thing to do with art...try thinking more about how the words sound together. Your poems will flow much better. A little bit of assonance, consonance, alliteration, or internal rhyme can go a long way.
-Cut down on the adjectives. These get really repetitive...a few good, well-placed adjectives are all you need (This will also help with word economy). A better place to put description is in the verbs you choose, since you're probably going to use a lot of verbs anyways--think about it. When you talk to someone, you use way more verbs than adjectives, right? Here are a few little sites that explain it better than I could
[link][link]Keep working at it. You have some awesome ideas, you just need to refine them. One last tip: Pick up some stuff from the poetry section of your library (the more recent, the better). The more poetry you read, the more you'll understand what works and what doesn't. Good luck!